Narrative Writing

R7 students sat quietly, waiting for their teacher to return to the classroom after playtime.

When Mr Victor said “You guys can come inside now.” When we were finishing our work we heard students yelling outside. Jayde went outside to see

what the fuss was about. She felt cold when she saw the wind blew roughly across the flowing Willow tree. When she saw children crying outside. She asked what was wrong and they said a dog was chasing them and they got frightened. So Mr VIctor went outside and said “ it’s ok the dog is gone the dog was a police dog it won’t hurt you.”
So then the children played with the dog and wasn’t frightened of it anymore. Mr Victor saved the day!











Room 7 did some narrative writing with Mr Victor here is the story i wrote.